When my friend and I arrived the village for sightseeing, I found that he got lost. Please help me to find him. Following are his features. First, his name is John. He has short and black hair and small eyes. And he is tall and strong with baby face, so he looks like a twenty-year-old boy. He also wears a pair of glasses and a ring on his left ear. When he was last seen, he wore a green T-shirt, black pants and a white cap. That day he had a black backpack, and his coat is in it, so he may wear it. The coat is white with a cute lion. Last, he speaks with a strange accent. If you discovery a person like him, please call me as soon as possible. Thank you for all your help.
標題好像錯了
回覆刪除耳環的話要不要加個ear 變成earring
要不要描述看看那個strange accent是怎樣奇怪
用discover吧?這個才是動詞
discovery 是名詞
回覆刪除arrive要介係詞喔
回覆刪除baby face 然後看起來像20歲??
When he was last seen
這句蠻怪的 the last time he was seen應該好一點
然後阿 以後寫文章 盡可能不要一直and..and..and