Contrasting - 1 - revised

     My friend and I looked for an apartment to share near campus.  We searched the webs for apartment sites.  And we found that there were two choices on the “findyourperfectapartmentrightnow” site.  One choice was “Fairfax Apartments”, and the other was “CAMPUS APTS”.  First of all, Fairfax Apartments offered large two bedrooms apartment, but CAMPUS APTS offered one bedroom apartment available immediately in large modern building.  I think that they have different advantage.  Second, Fairfax Apartments was furnished, whereas CAMPUS APTS was unfurnished.  Third, Fairfax Apartments requireed that we can not have pets. In contrast, CAMPUS APTS allowed us to keep pets.  But we had no pets, this regulation wasn’t important.  Last but not the least, the rent of Fairfax Apartments was $1250/month; however, the rent of CAMPUS APTS was only $900/ month plus utilities.  By comparison, my friend and I think that the former apartment was a fit place for us to lives; namely, we decided to rent Fairfax Apartments’.

Comparing - 2 - revised

     There are some identities of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson.  Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson had served as presidents of United States.  John Adams died on 7/4/1826.  Likewise, Thomas Jefferson died on 7/4/1826.  During their lifetime, they did many  same meaningful things.  First, they were important persons in American Revolution and signers of Declaration of Independence.  Moreover, they delegated to the Continental Congress.  In addition, they studied and practiced law.  In conclusion, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are great people, and they live within our heart!

Comparing - 1 - revised

      Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman are alike in several ways.  First, Stephanie Brooks’s eyes colors are brown and so are Ann Friedman’s.  Second, both Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman hair colors are black.  Third, Stephanie Brooks is 5’3” in height.  Similarly, Ann Friedman is 5’3” in height.  In addition,  they were born on 7/31/70!  What a coincidence!  If you are their friend, you must be very surprised!

contrasting - 2

     I'm hiring a new English instructor for my school.  I received the following two résumés from people applying for the job.  One is from Lynn Whitnall, and another is from Debra Fines.  The two résumés are different in several ways.  First of all, Lynn Whitnall’ s education is different from Debra Fines’.  Debra has more educations than Lynn.  So, I think that Debra will teach more useful things than Lynn.  Second, their employment experiences are discrepancy.  Debra has a lot of employment experience, while Lynn doesn’t have.  Owing to comparison of their experience, I think that Debra is more experienced.        Third, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, while Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006.  Therefore, I would like to choose Debra to be a new English instructor for my school, and I think she will do her best!

contrasting - 1

     My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus.  We search the webs for apartment sites.  And we find that there are two choices on the “findyourperfectapartmentrightnow” site.  One choice is “Fair Apartments”, and the other is “CAMPUS APTS”.  First of all, Fair Apartments offers large two bedrooms apartment, but CAMPUS APTS offers one bedroom apartment available immediately in large modern building.  I think that they have different advantage.  Second, Fair Apartments is furnished, whereas CAMPUS APTS is unfurnished.  Third, Fair Apartments requires that we can not have pets. In contrast, CAMPUS APTS allowed us to keep pets.  But we have no pets, this regulation isn’t important.  Last but not the least, the rent of Fair Apartments is $1250/month; however, the rent of CAMPUS APTS is only $900/ month plus utilities.  By comparison, my friend and I think that the former apartment is a fit place for us to lives; namely, we decide to rent Fair Apartments’.

Comparing - 3

     When I visited my friend’s home last month, we watched two movies.  We watched “Inkheart” and “The Spiderwick Chronicles” in the morning.  Inkheart and The Spiderwick Chronicles are alike in several ways.  First or all, Inkheart was was a science fiction film. Similarly, The Spiderwick Chronicles was a science fiction film.   And the former movie is as exciting as the latter.  Second, the characters in Inkheart; likely, The Spiderwick Chronicles consists of humans and cartoon figures.  So, I think these two films are interesting and cute, even though there are many ugly and evil cartoon figures.  Third, the ending of Inkheart is similar to the ending of The Spiderwick Chronicles, they are warm and fragrant.  Last but not the least, both Inkheart and The Spiderwick Chronicles teach us that the importance of family love and unity.  Therefore, if you want to see movies as your pastime after monthly exams, don’t forget to watch these two films!

Giving reasons -- My Favorite Season -- revised

 

     My favorite season is winter.  First of all, the winter in Taiwan is cold and cool, and I feel good and comfortable.  Second, because of the low temperature, the number of mosquitoes in winter is much lower than that in winter, and so are other insects.  Third, when we are doing exercise without lots of sweat, and the air is cleaner.   Last but not the least, the students have winter vacation in this term, and the New Year is coming soon.  For this reason, we can get some red envelopes to buy new clothes.  To sum up, there are too many advantages in winter, and I love it very much!