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2011年4月27日 星期三

Comparing - 2

     There are some identities of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson.  Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson had served as presidents of United States.  John Adams died on 7/4/1826.  Likewise, Thomas Jefferson died on 7/4/1826.  During their lifetime, they did many the same meaningful things.  First, they were important persons in American Revolution and signers of Declaration of Independence.  Moreover, they delegated to the Continental Congress.  In addition, they studied and practiced law.  In conclusion, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are great people, and they live within our heart!

5 則留言:

  1. live within our heart.....

    very good

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  2. 有用到很多不同的句法!!
    很好!!

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  3. 第4句後面應該不用加the

    不錯 變化多端!!

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  4. During their lifetime, they did many the same meaningful things.
    有很多 可是你下面的列點只有First 好像沒有很多的樣子喔~~~

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