There are some identities of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson had served as presidents of United States . John Adams died on 7/4/1826 . Likewise, Thomas Jefferson died on 7/4/1826. During their lifetime, they did many the same meaningful things. First, they were important persons in American Revolution and signers of Declaration of Independence. Moreover, they delegated to the Continental Congress. In addition, they studied and practiced law. In conclusion, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are great people, and they live within our heart!
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During their lifetime, they did many the same meaningful things.
回覆刪除有很多 可是你下面的列點只有First 好像沒有很多的樣子喔~~~