When you want to keep in touch with your friends but don’t want to spend a lot of money on stamps, you can try to send an e-mail. First, open the website and login. If you don’t have an account number, you can apply for one. There are many free e-mails, for example, Yahoo. Second, choose or key your receiver address. Third, fill in the subject of your letter. Then, write what you want to say. The contents you write can be casual, just like talking on the phone, but e-mail gives you more time to think about what you want to say with appropriate words and phrases. Last, check all the e-mail is desirable and you can press the “sent”. It’s easy to send an e-mail if you follow these steps.
for example, Yahoo 感覺太簡短了,舉多點例子比較好吧
回覆刪除what you want to say 這邊改表達(express)感覺比較好
press the “sent"這邊不用the吧?
When you want to keep in touch with your friends but don’t want to spend a lot of money on stamps
回覆刪除同一句盡量不要重複出現相同的詞 可以用 would like to
fill in the subject of your letter
這句怪怪的 fill in 應該是填在哪 所以應該是要打 fill the subjuct of your letter in somewhere
write what you want to say
用片語write down 會比較好
e-mail gives you more time to think about what you want to say
這太中文英文了 e-mail不會給!! 你可以寫 you can get more time to ~
check all the e-mail is desirable and you can press the “sent
最後如果描述順序的副詞在修飾的好一點就OK了
開頭要 checking e-mail要加S
TOPIC SENTENCE蠻特別的不錯不錯 :D
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