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2011年4月20日 星期三

Giving reasons -- My Favorite Season

My favorite season is winter.  First of all, the winter in Taiwan is cold and cool, and I feel good and comfortable.  Second, because of the low temperature, the number of mosquitoes in winter is much lower than that in winter, and so are other insects.  Third, when we doing exercise without lots of sweat, and the air is cleaner.   Last but not the least, the students have winter vacation in this term, and the New Year is coming soon.  For this reason, we can get some red envelopes to buy new clothes.  To sum up, there are too many advantages in winter, and I love it very much!

3 則留言:

  1. I feel good and comfortable why?解釋一下為什麼覺得又冷又酷很舒服?

    when we doing exercise without lots of sweat, and the air is cleaner

    doing->do?

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  2. when we doing exercise without lots of sweat
    文法錯了喔!!

    是還可以!! 可是總覺得太平凡一些

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  3. third 那句 好像沒有動詞
    doing 是算動詞嗎

    還不錯順暢

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