Contrasting - 2 - revised

          I'm hiring a new English instructor for my school.  I received the following two résumés from people applying for the job.  One is from Lynn Whitnall, and the other is from Debra Fines.  The two résumés are different in several ways.  First of all, Lynn Whitnall’ s education is different from Debra Fines’.  Debra has more educations than Lynn.  So, I think that Debra will teach more useful things than Lynn.  Second, their employment experiences are discrepancy.  Debra has a lot of employment experience, while Lynn doesn’t.  According to comparison of their experience, I think that Debra is more experienced.   Third, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, while Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006.  Therefore, I would like to choose Debra to be a new English instructor for my school, and I think she will do her best!