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2011年6月1日 星期三

Expressing on Opinion-2

    
I oppose using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.  First of all, this will increase greenhouse gas emissions.  We had only one earth, if the greenhouse gases harm to the atmosphere, our environment will become terrible.  Second, if the nuclear power plants explode accidentally, it will be an indelible injury.  For example, Chernobyl's explosion made a lot of people lead a miserable life.  Third, we don’t know how to deal with the nuclear waste.  There will be a lot of waste from nuclear, but they will harm our ecology.  In concluding, if we want to lead a safe life, we should reduce the use of nuclear energy, and save energy.

4 則留言:

  1. it will be an indelible injury
    可以寫成 cause an indelible ...
    In conclusion?
    還不錯:D

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  2. For example, Chernobyl's explosion made a lot of people lead a miserable life.

    應該不用用made吧? lead 直接放在a lot 前面 在people後面放to 就好了吧?

    In concluding=> in conclusion?

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