I’ve lived in a small town called Acton . It has a population of 2,500. It is safe, quiet, and clean place to live. Most of the people have lived here all their lives and know each other very well. And it has not changed very much in the past 100 years. Recently, it was last month that Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factory in our town. We were worry about this decision will bring some bad influence. First of all, the large town will bring many new people to the community makes population explosion. This quiet and clean place may become noise and untidy one. Second, the pollution from the consequence of building a new factory may harm the environment, including air pollution, water pollution and sound pollution. The air here may be polluted by some chemicals and the air may harm our health. The water may be polluted by waste water. But people drink the water with bad materials. The noise from the machines which are operating may ruin the environmental tranquility. Last, benefit-based relationships may become sharp. The people live here will not help each other without benefits. The peace of the town will disappear. Therefore, we don’t agree with this idea. We will protest against the decision to protect our town.
noise and untidy one noisy
回覆刪除But people drink the water with bad materials. 為什麼要用but接?
worry about that + 子句
回覆刪除noisy 才是形容詞喔!
噪音污染好像不是那樣喔
其他都還不錯!
sound pollution
回覆刪除應該不是這樣形容的
The people live here will not help each other without benefits
應該是living here
感覺你好融入文章喔 呵呵:))
你竟然要跟著去抗議喔
然後不要把大家都想的這麼邪惡咩
一間工廠就讓大家都變的敵人似的
我們週遭還不是一堆工廠
我們還不是都好朋友:)))
寫的很深入耶哈哈
回覆刪除noise pollution嗎
sound pollution-->noise pollution
回覆刪除你是屬於激動派的!!!